We recently worked with a Planning Engineer struggling to get interview callbacks despite applying to several roles. Frustrated with constant rejections, he turned to us for help.
In this case study, we’ll walk you through the exact resume mistakes that were hurting his chances, how we fixed them, and what impact our resume writing services had.
Client Background and Objective
The client opted for our Intermediate Package. During the consultation, he explained:
- He wasn’t getting shortlisted for any of the roles he applied to.
- He had no clue why his resume wasn’t working despite having relevant qualifications.
- He had made the resume himself without understanding how modern job applications work.
Key Mistakes Identified
After a detailed resume review, we identified 4 major issues:
1. Two-Page Resume for a Fresher Role
As someone early in his career, a one-page resume was more appropriate. The extra length diluted key information and made the resume appear unfocused.
2. Poor Formatting and Outdated Layout
The resume used a basic, outdated format with too much white space and no visual structure. It lacked any professional formatting making it boring to look at and hard to scan.
3. Generic Language in Bullet Points
His experience section had responsibility-focused bullets instead of achievement-driven language. It didn’t reflect the value he brought to the projects.
4. Not Tailored for Today’s Job Market
The resume wasn’t ATS-compliant, had no keyword optimization, and didn’t reflect current trends in resume writing. It looked more like a college assignment than a job application.
Here’s How We Fixed These Issues with our resume writing services
We built a modern, ATS-friendly resume from scratch, focusing on:
1. Crisp One-Page Format
Reduced the resume to one page without compromising on essential details.
2. Impact-Oriented Language
Rewrote all bullet points to highlight the impact and skills used rather than listing duties.
3. Highlighting Skills
Showcased technical and transferable skills within the experience section, making them visible to both ATS and hiring managers.
4. Visually Optimized, ATS Friendly Resume
Used a clean, professional layout that was ATS-compliant while still being easy to read and visually engaging.
Resume Transformation with Our Resume Writing Services
Here’s a glimpse of the before vs after transformation:
ATS Score of the Resume We Created
93% ATS Compatibility Score: We used a real job description from his target role and tailored the resume to it. The comparison tool showed a 93% match drastically increasing his chances of getting shortlisted.
Client’s Feedback On Our Resume Writing Services
Here’s what our client had to say after using our resume writing services.
Final Deliverables
Along with the resume, the client received:
- A professionally written cover letter tailored to his profile.
- An editable Word file with lifetime access.
- 30 days of unlimited edits post-delivery to fine-tune the resume if needed.